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Writing Skills

How to get a higher mark in writing?

1.How to analyze the directions

(审题)?

2.What makes a good composition?

3.How to leave a good impression on teachers?

1.How to analyze the directions

Read the directions for the following information:

title if possible (标题）

tense and voice （时态和语态）

person （人称）

style （文章题材）

the important points (list them out or underline them to make sure you won’t leave out one)（要点要全）

2.What makes a good composition?

* make sense and all the important points are included

beautiful language: beautiful phrases, expressions & structures, advanced vocabulary [ accumulate(积累） every day ]

* few mistakes

* well-connected, smooth, logical, clear, economical, tight, graceful

A good composition should be:

economical:

clear

tight:

graceful:

Use fewest words to say the most;

Don’t use masses of “ands”, “buts”, “ors”, etc.

Be pleasant to read.

well-connected

3.How to leave a good impression on teachers? Please have a look at the two passages by two of you.

* keep your answer sheet clean and tidy

* the important points should be attractive and usually in the given order

* pay special attention to the first three sentences and the ending

Let’s write the composition

again in your test papers.

title if possible (标题）

tense and voice （时态和语态）

person （人称）

style （文章题材）

the important points (list them out or underline them to make sure you won’t leave out one)（要点要全）

1. Read the directions and get the following information:

unnecessary here

the present tense, the past tense, the present future tense, active or passive voice

the first person 第一人称

应用文

List the important points out/underline them:

Why do you leave a message? (your purpose)

What do you want to tell Mr. Smith?

我去长城酒店找你，通知你去听演讲，但你不在.

1. When will the speech be given?

明天上午8点

2. Where…..?

3. Who will be the speaker?

4. What is the speech about?

来自中山大学的王教授

一个关于污染问题的演讲

科学宫

按所给路线图写明步行去科学宫的路线

1。科学宫离酒店不远，你可以步行去。

2。出酒店，然后向左转。

3。往前走。走到一个十字路口处向右转。

4。一直往前走，然后到达另一个十字路口。

5。在十字路口的右边，街道的拐角处有一邮局。

6。科学宫就在邮局的旁边。

①我去长城酒店找你，通知你去听演讲，但你不在.

better: You happened to be out when I went to inform you that you will attend a speech.

I went to your hotel. You happened to be out. So I left you a message.

② 演讲时间：明天上午8点

There will be a speech at 8 tomorrow morning.

The speech begins at 8 tomorrow morning.

2. Translate the Chinese phrases or sentences into English, using proper expressions.

The speech will be given at 8 a.m. tomorrow.

③演讲地点：科学宫

④主讲人是来自中山大学的王教授

⑤ 讲座的内容：污染问题

Let’s connect ②- ⑤ together

It will be given in the Science Palace.

The speaker is Professor Wang. He is from Zhongshan University.

The speech is about the problem of pollution.

The topic of the speech is about pollution.

He will talk about pollution.

1.There will be a speech at 8 tomorrow morning. It will be given in the Science Palace.The speaker will be Professor Wang. He is from Zhongshan University. It is about the problem of pollution.

Is this paragraph well-connected ? Economical?

2.There will be a speech ______ is about the problem of pollution in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning. It will be given by Professor Wang _______ teaches in Zhongshan University.

(better)

which

who

4. There will be a speech ____ the problem of pollution in the Science Palace at 8:00am tomorrow, _______ will be given by Professor Wang _______ Zhongshan University.

(the best)

3. Professor Wang, _______ is from Zhongshan University, will _________ pollution in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning.

(much better)

who

talk about

on

which

from

Show the way in English

1。科学宫离酒店不远，你可以步行去。

2。出酒店，然后向左转。

3。往前走。走到一个十字路口处向右转。

4。一直往前走，然后到达另一个十字路口。

5。在十字路口的右边，街道的拐角处有一邮局。

6。科学宫就在邮局的旁边。

Go out of the hotel and turn left. And you will come to a crossroads and turn right. Walk along the road and you will see another crossroads. On the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street. Walk along the street and you will find the Science Palace.

Is it tight enough? Are there many “ands”?

Now let’s make it tight.

But is it logical enough?

Let’s make it logical.

When

until

till

And then

________ you go out of the hotel, turn left. Walk straight down the street ______ you come to a crossroads. Take a right turn there. Keep on walking _______ you see another crossroads. ________ on the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street. The Science Palace is next to it.

The Science Palace is not far from your hotel, and __________, you may walk there. ______ , when you go out of the hotel, turn left. _______,walk straight down the street until you come to a crossroads. Take a right turn there. ______ keep on walking till you see another crossroads. ________, on the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street, and the Science Palace is next to it. You won’t _______ it.

First

Second

Third

therefore

Finally

miss

Enjoy a composition

with beautiful sentences and phrases

by Zhou Ping and Chen Jicheng.

You happened to be out when I went to your hotel. What I want to tell you is that there will be a speech to be given by Professor Wang from Zhongshan University in the Science Palace at 8 a.m. tomorrow. He will talk about the problem of pollution, which has a bad effect on our life.

Now let me show you the way. First, when you walk out of the Great Wall Hotel, turn left and then walk a few minutes until you come to a crossroads. Second, turn right and go straight down the road till you reach a post office. Third, turn right and it’s just a few minutes’ walk before you get to the Science Palace.

The speech must be a wonderful one, so you can’t miss it.

指路用语

沿着此路走。

在第一个/第二个十字路口向右/左转。

3. 坐三路车，在第三站下车。

4. 然后你就到了。

Go (straight) down this road/street.

Walk along this road/street.

Turn left/right at the first/second crossroads.

Take a left/right turn…..

Take Bus No.3 and get off at the third stop.

Then you’ll find/come to it.

I. commonly used basic structures :

1. S+V+IO+DO S+V+O+C

2. there be 句型

3. with 复合结构

4. it 用作形式主语或形式宾语

5. it is … that…

6. 表示不同与区别的句型

7.表示倍数的句型

8.表示“花时间”的句型

9.表示“花钱”的句型

10.表示“参观”的句型

II. Try some advanced structures

1.非谓语动词

2.倒装句

3.虚拟语气

4.名词性从句

5. 定语从句

6. 省略

I think the Internet is helpful not harmful as someone else thinks. We all know that the Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get much information. We can send E-mails or make phone calls to our family and to our friends. We can also attend the net school, read many books and even teach ourselves English. …

In my opinion

rather than

As is known to all,

is playing

a more and more important role

as well as

III.Use better phrases to replace the common ones.

Practical Skills

* Use the commonly used basic structures at proper time and accumulate them in your everyday study.

* Try advanced structures.

* Use some expressions to make your composition well organized and smooth.

* when copying your article to the answer sheet, replace the common ones with advanced expressions.

Thank you!